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Nobody
My best friend is my other half
Its always there right next me
It never leaves
It shares my pain
I call it Nobody becuase its just like me
Nobody is left all alone
Nobody talks to me
Nobody cry's while i do
Nobody has me as a friend
But Nobody isnt a good person
Nobody encourages me not to stop
Nobody tells me how horrible i am
Nobody just sits there and watches
Nobody can predict how im going to end...
My best friend is my other half
Its always there right next me
It never leaves
It shares my pain
I call it Nobody becuase its just like me
Nobody is left all alone
Nobody talks to me
Nobody cry's while i do
Nobody has me as a friend
But Nobody isnt a good person
Nobody encourages me not to stop
Nobody tells me how horrible i am
Nobody just sits there and watches
Nobody can predict how im going to end...
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Eh im feeling mute again. and violated...
This is terrible but i spent the last hour writing it. So meh, its okai
This is terrible but i spent the last hour writing it. So meh, its okai
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Your poem has a clear, strong theme that is emphasised constantly through repetition. "Nobody" in the given context relates to the feeling of exclusion, not only from society, but from a fair and happy life. The personification of "Nobody" is an interesting, and effective technique, which shows that the Persona's loneliness is so intense - so pervading, that she considers it a companion; as a soldier might consider Death his companion. The clever structuring of the stanzas allows for the simultaneous description of the personified "Nobody" and the neglect the Persona feels. "Nobody can predict how I'm going to end." This line is an extremely effective conclusion to the poem, as it shows the Persona's decisive act of rejecting her isolation and taking her fate into her own hands, rather than remaining a helpless victim of other's prejudice.